bad writing and bad editing.
this is a tragic story, compounded by tragic writing:
"The pilot attempted to turn the plane back when it went into the ground, witnesses said."
I would imagine an alert pilot would try that maneuver BEFORE encountering an obstructed air space!
Speaking as Captain Daniel E. Root, CAP - USAF Auxiliary (retired): The last half of the story is about the CAP's fine work securing the area; but people died here. Have some respect and write one story about the accident. If you want to, write a second story about how CAP contributed.
(and you're gonna say, "but hey, c'mon Root, it's a small town paper, whaddya want?", and I'll nod my head and agree with you...)
Last edited by Dan_E_Root : 05-26-2006 at 04:39 PM.
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